Friday, May 20, 2011

May 20, 2011

Great first draft of Jackson: Puppy of Steel, but I have one problem on page 57. Let me read it aloud.

Sarah relaxes on her couch with her cat, WHISKERS, as she catches up on the nightly news."

Didn't I say no cats? Replace Whiskers with a terrier, please.

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